
2024 Dissertation
The Hidden Language of Emotion:
Cognitive Romanticism in Wordsworth and Shelley
What is my dissertation about?
Here’s the short version, or my “elevator pitch.”
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Emotion is central to reading. Neuroscience helps us understand what emotion “is,” and English estimates how language shapes emotion where science falls short. I think that some categories of language, like metaphor, are connected to unconscious emotional processing in the brain. If that’s true, then the way we use these kinds of language could reveal a lot about how we see the world around us.
I apply these insights about language in the brain specifically to poetry (and understanding how a poet might construct the world for their reader), but the larger implications are for how we read political rhetoric. In both published poetry and public speeches, an author tries to get us to see the world their way for their own purposes. What are the subtle ways in which they do this? Being aware of the “hidden language of emotion” could help us communicate more clearly with one another and recognize subliminal manipulation as it works on us.
But here’s the rub: who is the “us” in question here? We do not all process emotion and language the same way, so an important caveat to my research on emotion is that we also consider how neurodivergent individuals, like people with autism, might engage with the same background textual elements.
Key Terms
When I discuss the following concepts in my work, this is what I mean:
Emotion: the current definition of emotion is informed by findings in neuroscience from the last 20 years. Emotions are not just discrete mental states that we can name or the physical sensations that accompany emotions (which we call “feelings”). We must consider emotion as a broader cognitive capacity connected to our ability to reason because of unconscious and evaluative dimensions, as general as positive and negative. Emotion is a “deep” structure that can be said to be located within the limbic system of the brain — from the Latin “limbus” meaning “border” between the cortex (higher functions) and the brain stem (automatic functions) — meaning that it functions both from the “top-down” and from the “bottom-up” in the brain.
Deixis: the use of words or phrases that point to, or index, things in the material world. Deictic terms refer to particular times, places, or persons relative to context. Examples include many prepositions and pronouns, such as “that,” “this,” “then,” “there,” “here,” “them,” “us,” etc.
Metaphor: a form of linguistic substitution; the figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable; a category of figurative language. When I refer to metaphor, I refer specifically to “conceptual” or “cognitive” metaphor. This type of metaphor refers to understanding of one idea in terms of another, such as “time is money” or “prices are rising.” “Poetic metaphor,” on the other hand, is a purely aesthetic category (example: “her mind is like the sea”). Simile is a form of metaphor.
Romanticism: refers to an artistic movement in which the joys of a simple life are “romanticized” as a reaction to social change; an intellectual and artistic movement associated with revolutionary changes that engaged all of Europe and the United States from the 1780s through the 1830s. We may broadly state that this was a period primarily characterized by secularization, rapid industrialization, the emergence of democratic institutions, the spread of literacy and education, and a greater focus on individual lives and experiences that artists of the day learned to navigate.
Autism: the broader concept referencing Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD), a term introduced to the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) V in 2013. This new definition of autism includes an objective list of specific behaviors for clinicians to identify for diagnosis. Autism is now understood as a neurophysiological condition, not a mental illness or individual pathology.
Abstract
A question central to mind studies that literature provides insight into has been (and perhaps always will be) whether the complexities of human emotion can be captured and conveyed to other people – and, if they can, how to achieve this through language. We typically do not consider background textual elements like pronouns or prepositions as carriers of emotion, but close readings of poetics informed by the conclusions from recent brain imaging studies suggest that not all emotional labor in a text is explicit. The orientating work that deixis does can subtly guide readers’ evaluative judgments in a given context, with the ultimate effect of immersing that reader in the text itself. On the other hand, metaphor relies on shared judgment of subjects and objects in the external world between speaker and reader to communicate value. Though they function differently in the English language, these two parts of speech each rely on a reader’s perception of emotional content in a poetic text and therefore affect how they might interact with the poet’s intended message. This dissertation argues that without investing a reader in a poem’s prescribed value system, there is no true understanding of poetic content. In other words: emotion truly is at the heart of comprehension.
To test this theory, I read closely the work of two British Romantic poets, a group whose poetics shifted from previous literary movements to champion emotion as the primary arbiter of experience. The first poet, William Wordsworth, composed for his collection Lyrical Ballads (1798) in response to the social mobilization he witnessed in revolutionary France, contrasted against a more capitalist and individualistic English monarchy. In these poems, deixis – perhaps unintentionally – functions to quite literally point to the perceived boundaries of English community, indicating who we do and do not consider as part of our cultural circle. Though initially inspired by Wordsworth’s earlier and more radical work, Percy Bysshe Shelley would grow to resent his aging conservativism. 20 years later, Shelley would collect nine poems to be featured in his 1820 collection of Prometheus Unbound, with Other Poems, responding to the mounting Spanish revolution. In Shelley’s poems, metaphor serves to broaden our ideas of what is possible in the universe. However, Shelley sabotages his goals in expanding the English mind by failing to consider how metaphor is actually processed, and what kinds of minds might be excluded from these culturally-dependent “in-jokes.” A neurodiverse perspective will help us to critically examine the unconscious assumptions that underlie social communication, especially when it comes to emotion.
With revisions to the concept of emotion itself, this thesis thus brings together three distinct fields of inquiry – literary criticism, cognitive poetics, and neuroscience – to make larger claims about where meaning comes from in a text and how we might conceptualize the process of reading from multiple mental perspectives. All three fields serve to support, inform, and clarify one another to advance a theory of reading that relies foremost on judgment, value, and feeling.
Contents
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This project is about emotion. Specifically, it is about better understanding how emotion really works inside of us, and how we might track its traces in the footprints that language leaves behind.
To understand how people feel, we must first understand what feelings are. When we feel, what happens inside our bodies? We find from recent brain imaging studies that emotion is in fact a much larger capacity dispersed throughout the brain, and how we feel touches everything we do and who we are. The first organized movement to actually conceptualize emotion as essential to thought was British Romanticism; in a time when the term “emotion” was first entering popular usage in the English language, the Romantic poets tried to express what they felt in order to understand how everyone could feel.
To explore unconscious dimensions of emotion as a cognitive faculty, I closely analyze the work of two Romantic poets, William Wordsworth and Percy Bysshe Shelley, formulated around explicit political goals: examining the habits of mind that govern our lives in order to disrupt these habits for a new age. Wordsworth and Shelley at their most radical recognized that powerful emotion could be used as a tool of social change; the only way to convince someone to take up a cause is to make them feel differently about it, and that means examining how they have come to view the world before that moment of encounter.
I argue that we can read unconscious emotion in two different categories of language that corresponds with each poet: deixis (Wordsworth) and metaphor (Shelley). Each category operates on pre-conscious assumptions that we make about the world, which have organically developed from patterns of feeling over time. Tracing how people point to things and people within Wordsworth’s localized ballads reveals how members of a community determine who belongs and who does not. Examining Shelley’s metaphors exposes how metaphorical speech is only successful among those already in on the cultural connotations of an analogy.
Further than these “universals” though, how might another mind experience these emotional moments in text? From this marginalized perspective, what might we come to understand about the neurotypical brain? Across these chapters, I explore how unconscious emotion is tied to language in ways that neurotypical scholarship might not have previously considered.
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This chapter is about understanding what emotion is, based on the most up-to-date and widely-accepted research in cognitive neuroscience.
First, I consider the historical development of the word “emotion” itself, not only to establish a Romantic conception of the term but also to highlight its longstanding connections with political action. Next, I detail how neuroscience has advanced our understanding of emotion as a neurological process in the late 20th century by introducing a new conceptual possibility: that emotion may be considered as an unconscious evaluative capacity in the brain rather than solely as disruptive mental states.
Understood in this way, emotion’s interconnections to other everyday cognitive functions such as decision-making, memory, and attention – all of which become engaged in processes of reading – become clear despite longstanding assumptions to the contrary. Finally, I consider manifestations of unconscious evaluation within the English language, especially in the form of deixis. Because deictic terms derive their semantic meaning from context, necessarily developed by a subject position, I propose that deixis itself is linked with the emotional categorizing of the world that humans do automatically.
Ultimately, I argue that deixis can be read as an expression of pre-conscious emotional appraisal, on the basis that indexing demonstrates the direction of a speaker’s attention and imperatively directs a reader’s attention to what is judged as salient. Contrasts against other subjects and objects in the environment reveal that the focus of attention is attached to positive or negative value and allows us to understand basic facts about our world – what is a person? Where are we? What is around me? – in identifying those things. Pronouns like “us,” “them,” “she,” and even “it” demonstrate who we consider to be a person and our affinity with them. Adverbs like “here,” “there,” “now,” and “then” establish a stable setting of time and place needed to orient ourselves. Finally, demonstrative pronouns like “this,” “that,” “these,” and “those” can establish relationality in communicating proximity or distance.
All three of these dimensions inform who we know ourselves to be; attending to deictic utterances therefore reveals much about how an internal worldview is constructed. These subconscious directives can and should be questioned to reveal inevitable biases that come with socialization.
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This chapter is all about testing my hypothesis about deixis, which I established in the previous chapter. I chose as my subject of study the second edition of Lyrical Ballads, because Wordsworth proves to be deeply invested in the ways that community is governed by emotion, even unconsciously.
Everyday life is shaped by how we feel about our surroundings and the people within them, even if we are not aware of how we feel in a particular moment. In observing how this happens around him, Wordsworth is especially preoccupied with what he perceives the here and now to be lacking: gestures of pointing “there” to a romanticized and distant “that” dominate the collection as examples of what we should be paying attention to rather than what we are paying attention to. Poems of interest include “The Thorn,” “We Are Seven,” “Goody Blake and Harry Gill,” and more.
This chapter is invested in several key questions: does attention to deixis in Lyrical Ballads alter readings of Wordsworth’s work? Does my framework of emotion-as-judgment elaborate on Wordsworth’s intended poetic purpose? From my readings, might we consider deixis as a point of intervention in understanding how communities are formed? This cognitive approach to analyzing Lyrical Ballads parallels other already well-established lines of inquiry. The act of pointing to something can never be a neutral act, as a subject always does the pointing and thus phenomenologically imparts their value onto the object. Ultimately, I argue that the way that a writer who is dramatizing a moment of encounter with the Other distributes pointing words like “this,” “there,” and various pronouns reveal an underlying emotional system of value built over time that imposes itself upon our relationships: we feel closer to some and distant from others.
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This chapter shifts away from deixis to focus on a category of language that is more conventionally associated with emotion in the humanities. Metaphor has in common with deixis the way that it can direct a reader’s attention. However, it has already been tied to conventional humanist understandings of emotion in ways that deixis has not.
Similarly informed by cognitive science, I critically read instances of metaphor as emotional language that we often take for granted (I should clarify that “metaphor” in this chapter refers strictly to the category of cognitive metaphor, rather than the purely aesthetic category of poetic metaphor: I am interested in how metaphor functions within the brain.) A large part of the way we communicate is metaphorical, but these metaphors are so commonplace in everyday expression that we do not often break down the comparisons that we rely on in speaking clearly to one another. Interrogating the relationships between the body and the world around it as well as around other bodies through commonplace “background” metaphors reveals yet another way that unconscious emotional processing shapes our speech.
We become accustomed to thinking of the world around us according to a certain schema that becomes integrated into the way we write, which can sometimes blind us to systemic injustices faced by persons on the margins. In order to understand the assumptions that underlie much of our communication, we might confront these instances of metaphors with a reading style that is atypical, or that does not share those assumptions necessary to interpret metaphors instantaneously.
First, I explain current cognitive theories of metaphor and explore discrepancies in metaphor processing that occur in individuals with autism, demonstrating how metaphorical interpretation is not a straightforward process and should be further investigated. After I establish what we know about how the brain processes metaphor, I trace Percy Shelley’s theory of language at a particular time of composition and compare it to our current knowledge base. Once this baseline about what is and is not true about the mind has been thoroughly explored, I will read the way that Shelley uses metaphor to achieve his ‘radical’ political goals within his 1820 Prometheus Unbound collection, focusing solely on the lyrical poems. After I explore the various assumptions about metaphor that Shelley’s poetry makes (perhaps without realizing), I compare Shelley’s use of metaphor to other literary representations of metaphor, particularly those by autistic poets like Hannah Emerson, that reveal gaps in his theories.
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To wrap up the dissertation, first I review the scope of the project:
I have proposed that emotion is an unconscious function of mind that affects other aspects of cognition like decision-making and judgment. Because of this notion of emotion as unconscious, it stands to reason that language – another capacity of mind dispersed widely throughout the brain – would also modify or effect emotion. I thus proposed two categories of language that might further show this link: deixis, or indexing, and cognitive metaphor. My interests in close reading poetry for these forms of language are rooted in advancing the critiques and questions of the Romantic period, but this scholarship should also be part of broader conversations about power and politics. Deixis and metaphor are not merely poetic categories; everyday speech includes both deixis and metaphor, and all manners of people deploy them in every language in everyday interactions.
Considering deixis and metaphor as fundamentally emotional categories in their connections to unconscious habits of mind not only frame language as a tool of individual expression (revealing one’s personal perceptual reality to an Other), but also as a tool of power (structuring one’s world with an utterance). Power in language is not always perceived, but the effects of its exertion are felt nonetheless and have material consequences on our world. The larger investment of this project is not just in revealing how individual speakers reveal their emotional biases to a reader, but also explaining how language comes to dominate others’ perspectives. An individual’s biases can be further guided by the language they encounter outside the realm of fiction.
I end by exploring real-world applications of deixis and metaphor to evaluate how unconscious emotion is often weaponized for political purposes. I then attempt to envision interdisciplinary collaboration with traditions similarly invested in or concerned with these kinds of political machinations by adopting best practices inherent to the discipline, like in anti-racist and Indigenous scholarship.
Lastly, I demonstrate the ways in which Autism Studies in literature might support the missions of these ongoing projects.
Key Texts
William Wordsworth
Lyrical Ballads (1800)
António Damásio
Descartes’ Error: Emotion, Reason, and the Human Brain (1994)
Hannah Emerson
The Kissing Of Kissing (2022)
Lily Gurton-Wachter
Watchwords: Romanticism and the Poetics of Attention (2016)
Mark J. Bruhn
“Lyrical Balladry as Affective Narratology” (2022), “Shelley’s Theory of Mind” (2009), etc.
Percy Bysshe Shelley
Prometheus Unbound: A Lyrical Drama in Four Acts, with Other Poems (1820)
George Lakoff
“The neural theory of metaphor” (2008) and Metaphors We Live By (1980)
Rachel Hewitt
A Revolution of Feeling: The Decade That Forged The Modern Mind (2017)
Stephen Levinson
“Deixis and Pragmatics” (2006)
Also featuring the work of
Sara Ahmed, Christopher J. Anderson, Noga Arikha, Michael Baron, James Averill, Nicole Baumer
Sara Ahmed, Christopher J. Anderson, Noga Arikha, Michael Baron, James Averill, Nicole Baumer
Harold Bloom, Rob Boddice, Edmund Burke, Brian Burkhart, Frederick Burwick, Julie Carlson
Harold Bloom, Rob Boddice, Edmund Burke, Brian Burkhart, Frederick Burwick, Julie Carlson
Victor G. Carrion and Shane S. Wong, Jonathan Charteris-Black, Morten H. Christiansen, Gerard Cohen-Vrignaud, Seana Coulson, Herwig Czech
Victor G. Carrion and Shane S. Wong, Jonathan Charteris-Black, Morten H. Christiansen, Gerard Cohen-Vrignaud, Seana Coulson, Herwig Czech
John F. Danby, Peter De Bolla, Christ'l De Landtsheer, Rene Descartes, Denis Donoghue, David Duff
John F. Danby, Peter De Bolla, Christ'l De Landtsheer, Rene Descartes, Denis Donoghue, David Duff
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Reading Demonstration
Let me show you what I mean.
The most controversial part of my dissertation — and the hardest sell — is arguably my assertion that indexical language (called deixis) is linked to emotion. To understand deixis as an emotional device, let’s start with a popular example read at length by Sara Ahmed: when Donald Trump talks about “those people” at the United States border, we know how we’re supposed to feel about them. But “people” is not a dehumanizing term, so where is the negative feeling coming from? It seems that negativity is located in the word “those” instead. There is an impulse to distance “them” from “us,” enforced by our language.
William Wordsworth plays with this same issue of proximity and distance many times throughout Lyrical Ballads, because he too is interested in social dynamics. Notable is his contrast of “this” and “that” in his poem “The Thorn.” The main figure of the poem, accused baby-killer Martha Ray, is described as a “poor woman,” and the deictic word “this” is consistently attached to “poor” throughout the poem. However, this coupling only happens with reference to certain objects: the thorn in lines 6, 17, 22, 28, 34, 56, 177; the heap of earth/hill (imagined to be Martha’s infant’s grave) in lines 49 and 57; the pond in line 57; Martha herself in lines 68, 81, 101; and the child/baby in line 157. There are some exceptional uses that fall outside this pattern, like “this other Maid,” but the final instance in the poem comes in stanza XVII when the narrator says when he first came to “this country” at line 183. After this point, the word “this” is never used in the poem again. Almost every instance of the word “this” has an adjective attached to it: “aged,” “poor,” “wretched,” “old,” “unhappy,” even “other” in the exceptional case of the Maid, which has its own weight to it. Only once is “beauteous” attached to a “this,” but even then, the “this” is implied rather than outright attached to the adjective that follows. The speaker creates a network of kinship among the “poor” occupants of the countryside – and, importantly, this kinship includes Martha Ray.
Instances of “this” in the poem far outweigh instances of “that” – counterintuitive for a poem about a woman inaccessible and kept at a distance on several levels. “The Thorn” even begins with a deictic term: “there is a thorn.” The first action of the poem is an indexical gesture to orient the reader, and it is over “there” that the narrator directs our attention, though this gesture is not sustained. The speaker repeatedly brings the listener’s attention not to a distant “that,” but to a proximal “this.” The only instances of “that” being used deictically in “The Thorn” are “that same pond” in line 62, “that doleful cry” in line 88, “that woeful day” in line 128, “that winter” in line 166, “that hill of moss” in line 220 and 242, “that poor infant’s blood” in line 222. Even when attached to the same objects (the pond, the hill, or the baby), instances where “that” are attached specifically reference moments when these objects are transformed into superstitious relics. For instance, the speaker mentions “that same pond” only when referring to the moment when the townspeople look for a drowned child in its waters. He speaks of “that hill of moss” only when the villagers imagine it as a place where a child is buried. He speaks of “that poor infant” only when the villagers imagine its blood has been spilled by Martha’s hand. These are all moments of projection, acts which are both distant from reality and have a distancing or ostracizing effect on the person that these projections are about.
Throughout this poem, we see the deictic signal word “this” associated with rural living and a broader national identity (ending on the definitive claim of “this country”) while the word “that” becomes associated with harmful projection. We distance disgusting or terrible acts in order to keep them away from us. Furthermore, the instances of “that” recalling superstition are in themselves monstrous: “that doleful cry” indicts the townspeople’s shameful attack; “that woeful day” indicts a man’s abandonment that created a victim; “that winter” reflects the period of cold and death that settles in among the wreckage.
In this poem, the speaker distances himself from both the projections of superstition and its tragic aftermath, while affirming Martha Ray’s place in the community by repeatedly drawing attention to her and the objects associated with her suffering. All the while, the speaker directs his listener’s attention “there,” to the thorn that stands as a symbol of the powerful feeling of fear and mystery that overtakes the village. The word “here” does not appear once in the entire poem; the poem is distinctly concerned with looking at what has happened over there, calling attention to the boundaries of the community. This relationship contributes to the feelings of horror, tragedy, and discomfort that countless critics have already identified as central to the poem.
By tracking the deictic terms that an outsider uses to describe the situation in “The Thorn,” we find Wordsworth’s central critique: Martha Ray is a part of the rural community. At least, she is thought of that way by a traveler not so deeply enmeshed with the town’s superstitions. She always has been, sharing the same status of “poor” that defines the commonfolk. Her distance from mainstream society is not due to some innate defect of madness but imposed by the projection of townspeople lacking concrete facts and left to their own imagining. Martha Ray is not inherently an “other” or even thought of as one until fear and superstition intervene. This is a shameful act, which is why the speaker subliminally distances himself from it. The tragedy of Martha Ray is that she is made an outcast, even when it is clear that she does not deserve to become one. “The Thorn” can thus be considered an indictment of exclusionary social politics. In this same way, we see the Female Vagrant turn from “that country” to “this moor,” where she wanders with no earthly friend – she finds kinship in the land when the “country” saps her heart of its joy. When we go into Wordsworth’s poem about a mad mother expecting to see her as a figure of horror, only to find that she was never as monstrous as we expected her to be, we are meant to feel disappointed in ourselves: the horror is turned back on the reader instead of directed at Martha Ray.
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